Winston at EBAFF, Bronx, NY

Response to Snowbaording on Mt. Pilcher

I found a poem in Space #3 by Alexandra

I love “Snowboarding on Mt. Pilcher,” because she was very descriptive and she makes me get an image in my head.

One part of the poem that stands out for me is: “It is brighter than a flashlight.” I think this is good because once again, she made me have an image in my head. Like I can actually see what is happening.

Another part that I loved was: “Bumpy as a rough boat ride.” This stood out for me because it shows how hard it was to be on the slope while she was skiing.

I look forward to seeing what Alexandra makes next, because she actually gets descriptive and that helps me see what is going on in the story. I also like how she makes me feel as though I was there.